The Pitch & Feedback

This video is when Rachael and I pitched our concept and ideas in front of the whole. This will help us on how we could improve or change the ideas we have got. 



After the pitch, we received different feedback from different students and also the teacher. The feedback that we got were:

• What editing should we us

For editing, we're thinking to have slow fades when its slow tempo and fast fades when it is fast tempo so it matches to the song. And it will also make the audience feel sympathy for her. When the female artist is going through all her old memories in the photo album, we will use dissolves to signify as all of her memories are fading away. 

• Do we have a female lead

We haven't chosen a female lead yet but we have some people that we could use as the female lead. They are good at acting and have done GCSE Drama so we can rely on them. We can't think of the final narrative just yet but we some ideas in mind. This people also easy to get in contact with as they go to the same school as us and doesn't live far. 

• What is the narrative of our music video

Our idea is about how the female is leaving the past behind her and moving on after the break up with her ex-boyfriend. She then realise how stupid she was to love him and move on about it all by herself. Our idea is about how the female is leaving the past behind her and moving on after the break up with her ex-boyfriend. She then realise how stupid she was to love him and move on about it all by herself. 

• What camera shots and techniques do we use

We make sure that the audience will focus more on the female singer by using close up shots to show her emotions and nothing is in the way that distracts the audience eyes. We might use tracking shots when she is walking in a street or path to make the audience follow at her movements throughout the video. And use long shots to show her body gestures to show to the audience how she is acting with the situation she is in. We might use an establishing shot of the location so  the audience know where it is set in. 

• Do we have some ideas on where to shoot our music video

We are planning to shoot in an abandoned streets or parks or somewhere that it is isolated as it matches the concept of the story.