Another feedback from our current Music Video

We have showed our current music video from our class before we start the ancillary task. These are the feedback's that we have got:

Advantages:

• Mise-en-scene was appropriate
• Actor portrayed the role well
• Sound at the end 

Improvements to do:

• Needs to soften the sound at the end
• Change the tilt shot on the stairs
• Add a little bit more narrative

Conclusion:

After the feedback that we have got from the whole class, we are going to do the things that needs to have some improvements on. We have got a short clip of the female artist and her ex running around the park and we decided to place it right at the start of our music video. Also we need to do a  few seconds of filming where the female is flicking through the photos on the photo album and it is going to be placed after the egg timer.